Tuesday, September 20, 2011

Garden of eden, bread

The writer of "A morsel from the Garden of Eden" does provide an insightful introduction that grabs the readers attention while sticking to the basics of the storty at hand.

The sensory details are very funny, I was well able to visualize, and relate to all the things happening in the story (one particular person comes to mind with this story).

The old man's conversations which are included help add to the story in very good detail, placing a person at the scene.

A person reading this story can see how the writer's life is impacted with this event; I think we all have someone like the old man in the story placed in our lives.

The conclusion is great, I can picture a stubborn person ignore all dangers to get what they hoped for!

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